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[剧透] [Proven] LC 49 spoiler English version

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发表于 2007-8-20 22:54 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Chapter 49 Assassin
“The one who wants to be my assassin, what’s your name?“
“Here we are, Pandora” There are two good-looking guy appearing.

“Dullahan Kyubu, Bat Wimber I think you are the best candidates for this task.”
“I wait here for good news”
“Yes” Then these two disappear. At that time, Aldebaran crosses his legs in the front of the Virgo Golden Cloth in the Virgo house.

“Farewell, Virgo” Then he take the wine. ”Although I even don’t know whether you like wine. Ha ha….” Taurus tells to Virgo cloth about what’s new in the Sanctuary.

“It’s going better in the Sanctuary, Athena and the Pope are preparing for fighting, the decisive battle is coming. We’ve get the beadroll made of your whole cosmos; we’ll use all the souls of the specters to color the beadroll. However, even I say so, I think I just go over no ground to say that because of letting one specter leave” Then Taurus laughs wryly.

“The one who leaves is Bennu Kagaho… I’m sorry for those chitchat” Taurus stands. “I wish I could see your strength in the battle”

As go out the Virgo house, there are lots of bats in the sky. Taurus sees three students and Tenma.

“Ohh, it’s you Tenma” Taurus laughs.
“Ouch…” Tenma is struck with a blow
“You need more practice. Libra said you always fool around, however, I still can see your attempt to fight” Taurus cross his arms.
“Of course! ” Tenma uses PEGASUS RYOSEIKEN.
“The trick is ok, however you need to progress more. ” Taurus strikes Tenma once more.

“Tenma still studies hard even now,  zzz…, I feel so sleepy” These three students go sleep suddenly.

Bats radiate the ultrasound. Tenma goes to sleep too. “What’s..” Even Taurus feels something wrong, but still lies down for sleep.

“Hahaha…great, my pets, let everyone in the sanctuary go to sleep”  
The reason that Tenma go to sleep is because of Bat Wimber’s NIGHTMARE SONAR. The transparent specter appears. “Bat, nice job…it’s so easy for you.”

Here comes Kyubu. “No matter how Pandora worries so heavily, he is just a Bronze saint, let me cut your head… ” Kyubu wave his Hand Knife .”Your head is mine…”

“Stop it!!”
“Here are some rats in the sanctuary unexpectedly. Your target is Tenma, but I won’t let you success” Taurus stands up.

“How…in Bat Wimber’s NIGHTMARE SONAR”
“I can’t hear it”
“Is it possible that you pierce your tympanum…?”
“Go to hell, GREAT HORN!!!!!” Farewell Kyubu…
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发表于 2007-8-20 23:02 | 显示全部楼层
顶一个!
翻译的辛苦了! [s:9]  [s:9]
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发表于 2007-8-20 23:06 | 显示全部楼层
還是使用進行時比較容易,如果使用過去時,沒準還要牽扯到過去完成時等過去完成時態的語法知識~~辛苦樓主了~~[s:11]  [s:11]

另外,貌似“Stop it!!” 能否直接翻譯成“stop!!”?個人見解,讓樓主見笑了~~ [s:9]  [s:9]  [s:9]
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发表于 2007-8-20 23:07 | 显示全部楼层
和日文的内容是一样的。 [s:9]  [s:15]
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发表于 2007-8-21 09:35 | 显示全部楼层
You've done a good job, LZ~~~!! [s:9]
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发表于 2007-8-21 19:41 | 显示全部楼层
我觉得这篇文章用过去时会好一点,因为故事发生在我们之前。
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-8-21 20:05 | 显示全部楼层
所有的故事與漫畫都是敘述當時發生的事
讓讀者有如臨當時的狀況
所以敘事上
應該是用現在式或是現在進行式比較有臨場感
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发表于 2007-8-21 21:49 | 显示全部楼层
只不过是,用过去时更加符合英美的小说习惯,因为你说的都只是过去的事情。
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发表于 2007-8-27 01:06 | 显示全部楼层
恩,我也觉得过去时好点
不过楼主已经很强悍了, [s:15]
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